Tuesday, November 07, 2006

“Can you please retell you experience?” the police officer kindly asked. “Sure, I’m kind of shaken from all that happened. I went though a lot tonight.” Jim mumbled.
It was a normal morning in the middle of September. There was a circus in town. Billy and his best friend Jim figured that there was only one day left of the weekend, so they tossed back forth ideas on what do you. They found an ad for a circus that was only in town for that night. Both guys asked around for people who were willing to join then at the event. Everyone was busy either studying for a test, or preparing for the next day the only other person, who could go, was Sara, Billy’s girlfriend. Being that none of the three going, have ever been to, or herd of this circus before, they were all looking up to it. On their way there, they stop and a fast food joint for a quick eat. on the way, they only saw one advertisement for the event. Hoping to have a good time, they had no Idea what was in for the night.
As they arrive, they only notice a few other cars. They figure they’re early. They head inside. The young lady at the ticket both assures them the show is that night and that they are just a few minutes late. As they leave the both, bill hears the girl whisper what sounds like “hope you enjoy your time because you won’t be leaving”. He figures nothing of it but his head playing tricks on him. When they enter, they are the only ones in the seats. They are happy to have gotten the best seats in the house. After about ten minutes, they start to get a little confused and wonder if they should leave. “Billy, I think we should leave.” Sara suggests. “No way, this show is gonna be awesome.” Jim debates. As Jim and Billy argue over weather they should leave or not, Sara starts hearing spooky noises. They decide to leave but find the front gate is locked. What are they going to do now?
“What are we gonna do, this must be some sort of trap. We gotta find another way out.” Jim says. “Don’t worry you guys. There has gotta be another exit.” Sara replied. As the search around for another way out, they find one. But it also is locked. They wonder why all the doors would be locked and there is no show going on. Was it all a scam. Wll they ever make it out. Then they all started hearing loud screams and bangs. they find their way into the dressing area of the building. They see creepy clown masks and start thinking they see the eyes following then. “C’mon you guys lets get outa here. I hate clowns.” Sara says with a fear in her voice.
“KABAM!!!” an explosion in the center of the circus ring startled the three kids. “What the hell was that?” Jim jumps. “I don’t know, but we better get outa this damn place!” Billy bladders out. As fear between the kids grows and grows, Sara begins to cry. Thing keep popping up. Then when they come around a corner, they see gunshot holes and knives in the wall. Billy notices a horrid smell and finds it’s the corps of a circus performer. The three kids are all about to die of horror. Sounds and movements continue. Sara gets especially startled when she sees a clown dummy, and starts running. The guys find it funny until the dummy come to life and starts chasing them to. The clown nearly caches Jim before they get into the bathroom and lock the door. Luckily Sara ran into he same bathroom. As the clown chops at the door harder than a lumber jack at a tree, the three decide on escaping though the air duct. Wile crawling though the cold as ice duct, it starts to creek. Then suddenly, a violent thrashing banging noise fills the duct. The kids scramble with fear. The thin metal duct collapses over all the moving around. The kids land in a pile of old clown suits and wigs. They fid themselves in the laundry room and gather some weapons. As they sit and wait, they realize none of them have a cell phone and panic.
Suddenly a car crashes into the room and nearly kills them all. They run for their lives and find themselves being chased by two more killer clowns. The clowns catch u to Billy and cut his throat and pierce his body with bullet holes. Sara stumbles at the site and regurgitates her diner. Jim throws her over his shoulder and runs to hid in a closet. They sit in the closet and wait. Trying to find another way out, they find a secrete passage behind all the costumes. The passage is a long narrow hallway that leads to a room fill with a huge assortment of guns, knives and other weapons. Jim and Sara load up just to realize all the guns are empty. The only lethal things in the room were the knives and a massive flame thrower. They decide knives can also hurt them so they take the flame thrower and set off to find a way out of the place. They end up slaughtering through hundreds of evil clowns and circus animals. Sara get wounded when a clown throws a machete at her. They make there way back to the laundry room to find that the hole in the wall had led to a fire escape. Being the only chance they have had the whole time they took they escape rout. They encountered more clowns along the way, and eventually ran out of fuel for the flame thrower. Jim found a bomb in another room, and decided to carry it for safety. Finding their way to the parking lot, they believed they were safe. Jim set the bomb to blow in 30 seconds, and they ran for their lives. As the bomb exploded, there must have been more fuel are gas inside the building, cause the whole thing went up in flames.
As the flames hissed, fire and rescue eventually came. Sara and Jim were immediately hospitalized. After days of tests and health restoration, they were both released. They were so happy to see our families, but so sad to break the new to Billy’s family. The two had also not yet over his tragic death.
They went on to live our lives, never going to a circus or fair again. Sara and Jim were now deathly afraid of clowns, and could hardly trust anyone. Then one day they found that we were in love. The two went on to get married and live happily ever after.

5 comments:

JMM said...

Great beggenning I loved the fighting sceen esspecially the end heppily ever after.=)

JTC said...

I really liked your story.It showed great detail especially in the fighting scene and I liked the ending too = ) .

Andy Gunskis said...

thanks to both of you. i wasn't really that confident about my story. i guess it's not that bad after all

ab said...

Your story is very good. I enjoyed the theme. I thought the beginning middle and end was solid. Just try to watch your spelling. Besides that your story is great.

RJW said...

As I started to read the story and it said that there were adds for a carnival as a "scary story" I was looking forward for the story because carnivals really are one of my favorite things too do in my spare time except for the fact that this is a scary story =(