“Revenge From Beyond The Grave.”
Chapter 1
The Beginning of the End
It was late at night; John was out on the town. He doesn’t usually go through the alleys, but today, he did. He was late you see, this evening was special, so he took a short cut. But on his way he saw something horrible. There was blood and guts Leading towards the storm drain 
“DIE, DIE, DIE!” Snake said while he was stabbing Andy the barber in the gut. Andy was forty-five years old with blond hair and 5’’2 he owed Snake money from a favor Snake did for him. So with a splat, the blood was coming out of Andy as well as other things. Andy was dead. John quickly hid behind the dumpster and swiftly flipped out his cell phone. Beep, Beep, Beep-Bring went the cell phone inaudibly over the chocking of blood heard behind him.
“ Police department this is officer Paula Smith, please state your emergency.” Stated the officer.
“ I just witnessed a murder on 7th and 18th St; please hurry!”
“ We will send a car immediately.”
Five minutes later the cops arrived and there was a struggle, but they arrested Snake.
“Your going to get the chair for this one Snake. Ha, ha.” said an officer.
“What, NO, I’ll get you John, I know you ratted on me. You won't get away with spilling the beans!!!”
John was frightened, but he knew that he would be safe because Snake was going to light up like a Christmas tree. He would be gone forever. Or would he?
Chapter 2
The Lightning
Many people know that before lethal injections, some jails used an electric chair. Well that’s what happened here. The West Side jail used the chair and Snake was shocked till his demise. A term that here means, Snake was electrocuted until his head popped all over the floor. Before the head popping Snake swore revenge on John.
 Again it was a dark night, but tonight the shadows mocked and intimidated you. John lived alone and was in the living room watching the Yankees when he passed out. He woke up in his bed the next morning but something was different.
“ I don’t remember changing my sheets to red last night.” He said. He paused a moment then surprised said “This is blood!”
He washed his sheets, took his shower, and got ready for the day. Over a breakfast of eggs and toast he watched the local news channel.
“Hi this is Curly Johnson here at Gross Greasy Goose Chase Manner. It seems there has been a murder and a robbery that has taken place here. The owner of the Goose Chase Manner is Montgomery Simpson, a philanthropist and very rich old man. We have been told that he was stabbed in the stomach and left to die.”
“ Oh my god that sounds a lot like what Snake did to Andy” John said “but how, he’s dead. No big deal, it has nothing to do with me.”
Or does it. What john didn’t know was Snake had taken control of him last night and had started his revenge.
Chapter 3
The Final Story
The next night John once again losses control of his body, but this time he was still conscious and in the back of his head he heard “ I’m going to kill you. I’m going to kill you.” He heard it playing over and over again in his head. 
“Ahhh! What's going on!” he saw the face of Snake in his mind and picked up a knife. It taunted him. His heart was a jackhammer beating faster and faster. He saw the scene playing in his head again “DIE, DIE, DIE! DIE, DIE, DIE!” Andy on the floor dead, Snake in the chair, Snakes head popping, Montgomery Simpson being stabbed in the gut. He drove the knife into his gut and sliced himself as if he were a turkey. He vomited blood; his guts pored out of his stomach! Blood was everywhere. His heart was on the floor, still beating. His head popped open from the intensity of the situation. John was no more. The next day the cops came to investigate his mysterious disappearance. They found him dead and arrested 3 men wrongfully for his murder. He created his own demise.
THE END
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5 comments:
i like the essay :)
i like how u had chapters
Chapters were a nice touch, but I would like more details. Chapter 1 confused me quite a bit--it sounds like you were rushing for all of your characters to "DIE! DIE! DIE!" :)
Try to focus on ONE aspect of your story and really polish it up--it will be great!
your essay was good = )
it was really interesting, and i think the way you wroteit,(the words you used, and the way you used them) really showed alot of feeling. it was interesting, and it kept me reading, nut id definatly needind more deatail. you maade it too short. i wanted to read more.
p.s. were did you get the charicters names from?...
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